In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is obvious that delayed childbirth is a tendency in some countries nowadays. Reasons for this trend as well as an explanation of why its drawbacks are outweighed by its benefits will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, there are two reasons why people tend to give birth to their first child later in their life. Firstly, the development of career is on the top of priority among youngsters these days. It is evident that spending years on studying and training is aimed at getting a high-salary job in the competitive job market, meanwhile, bearing a child may interrupt this process, especially in the case of women. Secondly, the responsibilities associated with a child may divert people from giving birth to a child. For example, the education of a child is so important that it requires parents to spare a considerable amount of time to choose suitable schools, orient their child's majors or even overcome the school issues like bullying that their child might face.
On the other hand, it is my belief that late child-bearing brings more advantages than disadvantages. The first factor could be attributed to the quality of raising a child, which is shown in parent's financial capability to support their family and their children. Furthermore, it is evident that parents whose knowledge and social skills are good tend to be able to teach their children better than those whose are not, especially young married couples. Another factor why having the first child late is beneficial is linked to the well-being of parents. I believe that when people are ready to give birth to a child, not only are they financially prepared but also mentally capable. This would lead to a fulfilled family life, which would give the child favourable conditions to grow.
In conclusion, career growth and child-bearing responsibilities are two reasons makes people these days delay giving birth to their first child. Meanwhile, this trend brings more positive sides than negatives ones through quality child-raising and parent's well-being.
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- In some countries today people are having their first child when they are older What are the reasons for this Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
- In some countries today people are having their first child when they are older What are the reasons for this Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10714285714 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83383348927 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556547619048 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.662703798 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321040514355 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102620007499 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471553874497 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198146063598 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149717843351 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.