Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people believed that children should be permitted to choose their own activities in their spare time, others think that parents should be control of organizing their children free time. In my point of view, I do not think it is a good idea and parents should give their children a space where they can do what they want if their activities not bad effect on everyone.
It necessary for children to have the opportunity to select their own activities to participate throughout spare time. When the children are given the freedom to choose their activities in which they want, they are more likely to do so with many excited and moviation leads to their feeling and emovation. They can pass their stress which made them have some feeling not good. To reduce that they can pay attention on more works and have effective on work. In addition, children who can control their spare time during the week would be
better to able to take risks,gain insight from their failures, and cultivate resilience, all of which are essential life skills that can be carried over into adulthood. This skill can not teach from any teacher and it turn up from the things that related to their life and I think in the future the childern who have all of this skills would be successful and better than the others.
The reson why is is important for children to have autonomy in select their spare time, they also depend on their parents who have permission them to organizing and choosing their free times acitivities. By working closely with their children by indentifying their interests and strength, parents can make informed decisions to solve their problem and the wrong doing that can makes their children become bad in the future. Regarding the types of activities that are best for their children personal growth. I think doing this for a long time parents can have develop their children skills and talents, also build their confidence and self esteem. Ultimaely, parents play an imprtant role who organize their children spare time activities and development, leading to a happy and prosperous future.
In conclusion, whereas some people believe that children should be allowed to choose their own activities during their free time, I believe that parents should plan and direct the activities that their children participate in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95674300254 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44753030616 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447837150127 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2094255114 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.142857143 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439726708136 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192757195064 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137797426133 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30702089492 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166871978063 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.