In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries, university students go to other cities rather than live with their family.
Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?
In several nations, college students live within their own residences, whereas in other nations, students at university relocate to other urban regions rather than residing in their original homes. I believe the benefits of dwelling far from home would predominate.
On the one hand, some people say that it is better for students to live with their family. The main aspect is existing comfort and convenience. Assiduous attention is paid and tender loving care is taken by parents, which brings a feeling of security. Also, healthy comestibles are ensured at any time, which gives nutritional adequacy and fitness enhancement. Besides, items are easily purchased as food shops and apparel parlors in the locale are accurately known by the students. Furthermore, the assistance from relatives and acquaintances could be offered whenever the college students need.
On the other hand, others and I believe that living distantly has more benefits. One benefit is that college students are inclined to become self-reliant. It means that they are likely to handle arising issues without parental help. Temporary housing during university years has to be found, and an everyday diet managed as well. Also, transportation is an element which needs to be considered. Besides, they have to make financial decisions wisely in order to buy necessities and accumulate savings. Later they would be efficient problem-solvers, and success in both academic environment and work setting could be attained. Another benefit is individual connectivity. When the students live in a location far from their house, they have to associate with surrounding strangers. Establishing a close rapport with roommates or neighbors, for example, is an act showing proper social etiquette. In the long run, the students can grow their network, and receive support from different sources if they fall into trouble. It is certain that apart from parents, truthful friends and neighbors are sometimes the optimal helpers in the worst circumstances.
In summary, there are both advantages and disadvantages in this matter, but I believe the benefits would dominate the other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, apart from, as to, for example, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45345345345 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9023025854 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8791506696 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4761904762 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305062032454 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072167078535 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864461372982 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187661900978 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1002697757 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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