The bar chart below shows the average hours spent per day in leisure and sports activities by youngest and oldest populations in the US in 2015 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart below shows the average hours spent per day in leisure and sports activities by youngest and oldest populations, in the US, in 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart demonstrates the daily average hours committed to recreational and sports activities by the junior and senior groups in America during the year 2015.
Overall, watching TV interested both age groups the most, and the figure of the second group was twice as much as the first one. Physical and leisure activities, on the other hand, received the least attention.
In terms of the first 3 activities, watching TV is the top chosen by the two groups, with 2.2 and 4.4 hours per day for the juniors and seniors respectively. Reading is insignificant among the young, with the figure about one fifth of that for the old. The same pattern is obvious in relaxing and thinking, with the 5-time-higher figure for the old compared to that for the young.
As regards the last 3 activities, the amount of time for social interaction and communication is comparatively equal, at over 0.5 hour a day. The time quantity of computer used to play games and relaxation among the youngsters is twice as much as that among the seniors. Sports, workout and recreation appealed more to the youth, with the three-folded figure in comparison to that for the aged.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, as regards, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85427135678 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7873733633 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9919265718 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101482209101 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427278948277 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586340540294 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732415682706 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688894606255 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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