In some countries women no longer feel that need to do get married.some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require finicialsecuritythat marriage can bring.To what extent do you agree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
...nship between two persons man and woman.In various nations females do no want get ...
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Suggestion: Few
...nations females do no want get marriage.Few masses are think that this is due to wo...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
... do no want get marriage.Few masses are think that this is due to women ability becau...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...his is due to women ability because she are able to earn their own money from their...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...r own money from their job so that, she do not feel requirement for marriage.Hower...
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Suggestion: Howerver
...he do not feel requirement for marriage.Howerver,I am totally agree with the statement a...
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Suggestion: , I
...t feel requirement for marriage.Howerver,I am totally agree with the statement and...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ment for marriage.Howerver,I am totally agree with the statement and I will deleve my...
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Suggestion: , there
...pcoming pharagraphs. To commence with,there can be many reasons behined the situati...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...n be many reasons behined the situation.Firstly,feminine are not dependent on other peo...
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Suggestion: , feminine
...ny reasons behined the situation.Firstly,feminine are not dependent on other people she a...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...e are not dependent on other people she are independent.Girls do not trust on other...
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Suggestion: Girls
...ent on other people she are independent.Girls do not trust on other people because sh...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...fill their own needs easily and quickly.Moreover,woman is finicial strong and she can do...
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Suggestion: , woman
...ir own needs easily and quickly.Moreover,woman is finicial strong and she can do every...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... she can do everything with herself she do not want give support to their partner ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'their'?
Suggestion: a; their
...ahead, in moderen times every girls has a their motive which she want to do achieve in ...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...very girls has a their motive which she want to do achieve in her life therefore she...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...to do achieve in her life therefore she do not feel for marriage and hers neglect ...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...riage and hers neglect to their wedding.Furthermore,there can be a special cause of this eq...
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Suggestion: , there
...ers neglect to their wedding.Furthermore,there can be a special cause of this equal li...
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Suggestion: Nowadays
...pecial cause of this equal life partner.Nowadays,every girls want to their husband accou...
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Suggestion: , every
...ause of this equal life partner.Nowadays,every girls want to their husband accourding ...
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Suggestion: But
...rson if she is graduated or buisnessman.But sometimes she could not get their equal...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ld not get their equality person so she are ignore this part of her life. On the...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ignored'.
Suggestion: ignored
...ot get their equality person so she are ignore this part of her life. On the flip s...
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Suggestion: , there
...is part of her life. On the flip side,there are some disagree points which is I am ...
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Suggestion: There
...ee points which is I am describing next.There are little girls are fearfull from marr...
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Suggestion: Also
... could not handle their neagtive nature.Also,some are single in their family she hav...
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Suggestion: , some
...ld not handle their neagtive nature.Also,some are single in their family she have not...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...lso,some are single in their family she have not other brother and sister then she w...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...e not other brother and sister then she want to live with their parents and do not w...
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Suggestion: , girls
... want to do marriage. To conlude with,girls should be strong for every conditions....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iage. To conlude with,girls should be strong for every conditions.she should b...
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Line 9, column 215, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depended'?
Suggestion: depended
... freedom to girls so that she should be depend only on themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92192192192 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44179518016 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498498498498 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3525660321 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 327.8 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.6 20.7667163134 321% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258730409986 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165583267974 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653596296629 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165583267974 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653596296629 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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