In these days, it is ubiquitous for the young generation who take a break after graduating high school to work or go abroad. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also some drawbacks.
On the other hand, it is clear that broaden the horizons or working would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would make the youth more independent. This is because they spend the whole year immersing in another culture and country, as well as solving the real world problems by themselves. Consequently, adolescents who dare to step out the comfort zone, they could find the purpose of life and enjoy whole life without any regret. Another reason is that it would help young people gain many hands-on skills, which is essential for their career. For instance, in the software area, when adolescences take a year to face up the real-life problem, they could stand out at the employment marketplace.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First and foremost, there is a possibility that they will fall behind when compared to other students. If students were wasting a gap year to hang out with buddies or be addicted to the game, they could not enough strong motivation to follow the academic program in university. Second, the young generation could be demotivated by money which is made from work. In particular, there are many possible cases that because of high-paid jobs, they may decide to drop out the academic course. However, this is claimed that the academic period is a vital opportunity for every student to explore themselves.
In conclusion, there are plus points to experience the company environment and abroad culture regarding independence and high-income skills. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of waste time and money attraction.
- Some people believe that social media sites such as Facebook or Twitter have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way 61
- Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups. Discuss both of views and give your opinion. 73
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. 84
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 73
- In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11221122112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70285544794 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6404890943 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148773951314 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461743320946 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465461620311 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09367474518 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529269775906 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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