In these modern times, it is likely ubiquitous for adults who prefer to live separately or live in a small family rather than stay with extended family. This essay will show that this is a positive trend and can enhance the self-control of young adults. It will first suggest that separate living is vital, followed by a discussion of how it can lead to small family enables parents to take care of their children's future.
First of all, this type of separate living will improve young people independent mindset. One evident strength is that they would make their own decision which could affect their career. If the youth lived in an extended family, their elder's idea place a large burden on their choices. For instance, they could determine the university that they fascinated in, as well as work at a company which is perfectly matched for them. Consequently, there is a possibility that the young generation would be more self-control and they could enjoy a delighted living which is created by themselves.
Second, living in a modest family is a great opportunity to support the children. It is claimed that children who live in a small family could receive more love from their parents. This is because their parents will not be affected by others relative-related responsibility such as supporting relatives to commute their adolescence and so on. Perhaps, the youth grow up in modest family would be more educated because of closed attention from their parents.
In conclusion, I think that independent living is a positive one because of the improvement of self-control and the development of children. I believe it is imperative that the elder should provide to their children an independent living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82407972356 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8387674145 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198275979693 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788966598577 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702821672847 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122619945409 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554490159766 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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