In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
It is true that today’s youngsters have healthier and wealthier long lives than in the past, especially in developed countries, however, they live less joyful than the older generations. The roots of this tendency might be the materialistic lifestyle of many young people, and the governments could take several steps to address this problem.
Material values are favored more than spiritual values among young people these days. This is partly because they are exposed to commercials and videos that deliver those messages intensively. Luxury products reviewers, for instance, make videos showing extravagant clothes or bags could bring satisfaction and a happier life. Those content as a result create illusions, such as that only expensive products could make one happy, among today’s youngsters.
National and local authorities could solve this problem with some measures. The first one is implementing regulations that ban advertising or content that encourage such kind of lifestyle. China have established laws that stop movie directors to create certain types of content, for example. Another measure could be providing funds for social projects that motivate young people to cherish their lives, their surrounding relationships, and their possession. Those steps combined could change the concept of a happy and fulfill life among youngsters.
In conclusion, while being materialistic cause today’s youth to feel less satisfied with their lives despite having higher living standards than the past, government bodies could tackle this problem by enforcing policies to prevent toxic content on the internet and allocate resources to hold aspiring campaigns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.708 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7646019605 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3303809461 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188224700816 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060716765102 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498985681813 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119574724636 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568382205985 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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