Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than academic qualifications.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, social skills have become more essential than educational qualifications when recruiting employees in most businesses. I partially agree with the statement, and I would like to elaborate on it in detail below.
It is clear that excellent soft skill is one of the essential things to success on the career path. Specifically, negotiation skill is the key to approaching someone and building a good relationship for not only personal connection but also partnership relatives. First, negotiation skills mark professional communication skills for employees when working with sellers or partners; based on this, they can achieve outstanding business achievements. Secondly, people specializing in negotiation can apply to any position in the business industry. For instance, an employee with excellent presentation expertise can help customers understand the products and can convey to them to buy that product.
In contrast, some people believe that academic knowledge is highly required for career development because of the following reasons. Firstly, professional knowledge is a basic element for everyone to practice in a job. For example, employers all require a minimum of a bachelor’s degree for executive candidates. Furthermore, most multinational companies prefer employees with high qualifications to take prompt managerial decisions; leading to outstanding business development. As a result, there will be many advancement opportunities for highly qualified professionals.
In conclusion, I think both advanced studies and other social skills are of equal importance in today's recruitment market. Having workers with both these qualities makes an organization grow and helps in building a strong workforce altogether.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92063492063 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36938179583 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662698412698 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9976957669 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198006349124 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594756339342 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047674711094 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116803179998 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047430298472 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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