It is widely believed that the importance of social skills outweighs that of academic certificates in job recruitment. From my perspective, this opinion is totally true.
First and foremost, it is via this way that the employers will unable to sort between real talented applicants and deficient ones. This is due to the fact that nowadays the educational curriculum is becoming easier and easier, resulting in such qualifications becoming achievable day by day. Furthermore, even in some cases, those certificates can be faked, which means that the academic qualifications cannot totally prove a person's ability. Meanwhile, the social skills cannot be faked easily as it can only be achieved through realistic experience that does show a worker's real capability.
The second point is that only by testing employees via social abilities can the employers find out true genius in their field. Since not every applicant has a chance to approach educational programme due to their poor condition, it is harder for them to receive any study certificates. Nevertheless, a lot of them do have realistic experience that enhances their skills such as soft skills, as the majority of the impoverished has to be exposed to workplace in order to be financially stable while the others are trying to get academic qualification. Thus, unless companies want to lose the most suitable workers for them, they will have to recruit by social skills.
To conclude, in order to recruit the real talented employees, the employers need to base on social skills to judge, not academic qualifications.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...c qualifications cannot totally prove a persons ability. Meanwhile, the social skills c...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a worker' or simply 'workers'?
Suggestion: a worker; workers
...ugh realistic experience that does show a workers real capability. The second point is...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, as to, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24803149606 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02402443599 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3826005198 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223327652084 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837388827293 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042099980977 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14305679125 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512700513357 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...c qualifications cannot totally prove a persons ability. Meanwhile, the social skills c...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a worker' or simply 'workers'?
Suggestion: a worker; workers
...ugh realistic experience that does show a workers real capability. The second point is...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, as to, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24803149606 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02402443599 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3826005198 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223327652084 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837388827293 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042099980977 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14305679125 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512700513357 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.