Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employerssee no benefit in doing so.
Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion
Nowadays some employers are interested in investing money on employee’s leisure time activities in order to boost the quality of the work they do, however the others have a view that this can not be beneficial.
There are various reasons to subsidise work out activities of employee in any workplaces. First of ll long hours of physical and mental work lead to some disorders in our body and mind such as stress, obesity, anxiety etc. To overcome all of these health problems there should be a healthy life style with regular activities. In addition, regular activities have a positive impact on human’s moral condition such as increasing motivation, self confidence, self awareness. This can lead to the better job satisfaction with compare to whom are not the members of gym and sports club.
On the other hand, companies which are mostly financial target focused are more interested in short term goals instead of long term healthy goals by subsidising sport activities. As a result, they are willing to find more useful ways of motivating employee to work more efficiently by giving some rewards, bonuses or higher ranks. Companies in which subsidising activities seems unattractive also prefer to subsidise educational support of their workers in order to be more aware of the work they do.
In conclusion, companies are able to take powerful steps on their industry by investing money on worker’s leisure time activities in order to satisfy them from the aspect of work/life balance, however some employers see drawbacks of it.
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 61
- Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employerssee no benefit in doing so.Consider the arguments from both aspects of 56
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88497248922 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8034186786 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223346967985 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832676580107 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522455614937 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13335383114 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039021537133 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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