Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved
It is undoubted that the accelerating rate of ex-criminals after having freedom has ushered in some pressing concerns for society as a whole. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main effects of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to it.
There are two main reasons why the ex-prisoners have a tendency to return to commit crimes after having liberty. The first reason associated with this phenomenon is that the lack of education and the poverty that the offenders will be faced in the future. As an illustration, some criminal has been locked up in jail in a long time so they cannot adapt to keep pace with the changes of social, causing unemployment and shortage of money to cover life. In addition, crimes after leaving prison could be shunned and discriminated against by society. Consequently, they will feel depressed and isolated, leading to prone to involve in committing illegal acts.
In order to stem the tide of increasing of ex-crimes rate, I believe we must first address its root cause. First, government should responsible for educating job-related skills and law system to the criminals. Having some knowledge of the job, offenders will be better prepared to find a suitable work which enable them to earn a living after being released. Furthermore, people should create an opportunities for prisoners who leave prison to integrate with humanity life. For instance, when someone is recognized as a part of social, they will live more actively and make contributions to develop the economy, relieving burden for government and society.
In conclusion, this problem is unlikely to be tackled in the short-term, however, it is by no means insurmountable and I am convinced that government and social will help criminal have a better life after paying for unlawful actions they do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07641196013 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8650319886 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8045607772 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239073434232 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859059862636 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687931927656 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139622850852 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582283352499 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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