Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this antagonistic world, assimilating a foreign language has become a tendentious subject for the kids owing to divergent lucrative pros.According to the experts prognostication, overseas language should be highly rather considered by the toddler at primary school than secondary school. According to my point of view,this trend has both the benefits than drawbacks. Further, the twain view points of this given statement have to be initiated in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, abroad language has a cardinal role to play in the life of infants because of several merits.Firstly, being a multilingual bestows a profound acumen to them to compete in this combative world.For instance, articulate with other person is very feasible for making understand in an adequate way. Secondly, they can make new friends on the social networking sites such as facebook,instagram,viber and so on and due to this ,the specific knowledge can be accumulated about other cultures.Finally, with the help of innovative language, children have a chance to get an employment conveniently in the varied sectors of work just because of knowing about second language.
Furthermore, studying other language has also some demerits in the adolescent's life because they distract from their particular study subjects in order to grasp a new language.Moreover, they have to escalate the utilization of time to emphasize upon both the studies so therefore it is also becomes the reason of an excessive burden.
To conclude, i vigorously confess that the children should not be forced to pursue a new language in their early period of education and it should be only obligatory to learn in the secondry period of an education because the children are able to learn on that time because of shrewd level.
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The essay is not exactly
The essay is not exactly right on the topic. the content should be about 'begin learning a foreign language at primary school or secondary school'. but seems you are comparing and contrasting the advantages/disadvantages of learning a foreign language in a general manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30633802817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32785600204 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.218680858 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.285714286 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5714285714 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.1428571429 7.06120827912 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212180129139 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092296198171 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107750446217 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11528271361 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926380999963 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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