Some Experts Believe That It Is Better For Children To Begin Learning A Foreign Language At Primary School Rather Than Secondary School

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Some Experts Believe That It Is Better For Children To Begin Learning A Foreign Language At Primary School Rather Than Secondary School

Nowadays, it is true that some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. In this essay, i completely agree that it gives more positive than negative for same reasons.

In the one hand, the advantage of this issue is to be able to familiarize foreign children from the early hours to be honorary the communication skills. it is because when it is a child, the child is easier to catch or accept the taught. For example, a child named kirana, early in his time he taught several languages by the mother, like english and arabic. As a result, kirana is now growing into a child who is multilingual and can be more easily communicate.

And on one side again, the disadvantage of this issue is children will be more likely to forget the language of their own country because he is too cool with his new language. it is due to he was too interested in the foreign language taught. like an example, children who accustomed to watching the film Ipin Upin directly they will follow the language as they watch. And the result, many children talk to fellow friends or they family with use language Melayu.

I agree with the teaching of foreign language from an early age, but still must be under the supervision of teachers and parents. So that the foam control of the child when he uses his foreign language and when to use his native language. In my opinion in schools must b able to provide foreign language learning with more intense and more focused.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, still, as to, for example, as a result, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65693430657 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48662038558 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4327758536 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337918527706 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126992984042 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.229540229253 0.0667982634062 344% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250596824793 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.256051148789 0.056905535591 450% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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