Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The government takes the ultimate role to rule the people with power and responsibility. Certain group of people is thinking that government should give first preference to the healthcare sector. I agree since health is the primary factor in a person’s life and government helping the diseased economically will benefit the people.
The government involvement in a person’s healthcare is the primary factor to improve the link between government and people. The healthcare is given uttermost importance and services are made in various places but in few peoples it is still in starting stage. The government should be aware about the need of the public, making the healthcare term to visit villages and remote areas to conduct seminars and create some awareness among public regarding the importance of their health. For instance, few free tests can be conducted in few remote areas to check the normal well-being of the individual.
Nevertheless, Government supporting the people suffering with disease financially will certainly benefit the people. The financial support can be nominated for people of lower status particularly those who live without a home and who lost their loved ones in work such as army man and fisher man. The money that the government gives will surely profit the people and the government, as the government is for the people to benefit them. For example, the insurance for each individual, various schemes of healthcare awareness to people will profit them economically.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... peoples it is still in starting stage. The government should be aware about the ne...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e normal well-being of the individual. Nevertheless, Government supporting the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30543933054 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87407803898 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543933054393 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2042446727 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163536957433 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701578403411 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475536665205 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121044255462 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054910564608 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... peoples it is still in starting stage. The government should be aware about the ne...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e normal well-being of the individual. Nevertheless, Government supporting the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30543933054 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87407803898 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543933054393 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2042446727 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163536957433 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701578403411 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475536665205 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121044255462 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054910564608 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.