Some individuals think that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback to employers. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, some people assume that teleworking is beneficial to employees but it is completely opposite to employers. From my perspective, employers are able to take full advantages of working from home.
To begin with, the wire technology has opened up a variety choices of up-to-date possibilities and options for workers for the purpose of remote working. By using mobile phones, tablets or computers, they can easily access in different kinds of informations and assist their work more efficiently. Moreover, virtual working gives employers the ability to work at their own pace without being disrupted by any distractions, offline meetings. Another factor that cannot be denied is working from home is less stressful and exhausted than working at office.
Online working is also another way to reduce traffic jams and exhaust fume that come from transportations. As employers and employees have to work at home, there are less transports and smoke on the street and it is healthy for the whole community. Mobile work is an exquisite choice for salaried workers who desire for more income. For instance, various online websites can help individuals to earn money by writing comments when listening to new songs or translating passages and emails for companies. Additionally, disabled employees choose virtual working because it is convenient and more comfortable for them as they cannot go to work like normal people.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that teleworking is advantageous for both employers and employees and this should be promoted.
- Nowadays some parents put a lot of pressure on their children Why is the reason for doing that Is this a positive or negative development for the children 73
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some individuals think that working from home while of benefit to employees is actually a drawback to employers To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime Do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun transports is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ployees have to work at home, there are less transports and smoke on the street and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30241935484 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91748012788 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.392733638 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.583333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191652659774 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797424043166 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557265945973 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127782578598 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482946397768 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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