Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Nowadays, a lot of toys, ranging from simple dolls to complicated electronic gadgets like
video games, are provided for some children by their parents. I think this is not a problem
provided children are sufficiently active and care for their toys.
One of the important advantages of children having lots of toys of toys is that there are
different games for them to play. They can choose one of their toys according to their
mood and taste, and are less likely to become bored. Besides, they would certainly be able
to learn a wider variety of skills like problem solving or organization. Different toys can
teach them different things, which means that the more toys they have, the more they
are likely to learn.
However, having a lot of different toys could possibly lead to children becoming overweight
since many modern toys like video games and LEGOs, which are very common these days,
are usually played indoors. Therefore, they would definitely reduce children’s physical
activity, leading them to gain extra weight. Furthermore, when kids have too many toys,
it is likely that they will take less care of them. In other words, they will probably not
learn to value them if there is always a replacement ready to play with. Consequently,
they would not learn to appreciate their belongings.
In conclusion, I believe that children benefit from an abundance of toys which offer them
variety, as well as teaching them more varied skills. However, it is important that they
keep an active lifestyle and are taught to value every toy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of toys'.
Suggestion: of toys
...tant advantages of children having lots of toys of toys is that there are different games for ...
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Line 14, column 41, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...However, having a lot of different toys could possibly lead to children becoming overweight s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11153846154 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54791654067 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8863922147 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220917674731 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912533357946 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751400500023 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784356461128 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749426295758 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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