Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent
crimes. Others say that this way of punishment is not acceptable in today’s world. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays the rate of violent crimes is remarkably nigh and the
methods of regulation in this area often become the reason for arguments .
People usually say that death penalty has to be forbidden in modern world,
while many still claim this kind of punishment to be appropriate for brutal
criminals. Although some horrible actions of a few individuals are truly
unforgivable, I believe that death row can be used by government to violently
control it’s citizens.
On the one hand, crimes, such as child murder, rape and kidnapping
leaves a victim with an enormous trauma, that will definitely affect their life
in negative way. This is because the punishment has to be reasonable and
court has to consider the seriousness of a crime relating to it’s
consequences. Therefore a criminal is to face the outcome influencing their
entire life, as will their victim. For example, according to NYPD records a
witness, who got his whole family killed in 1998 regularly had panic attacks
for 30 years after the incident. In other words justice in such situations
happens to be violent.
On the other hand, a legal way to murder specific people will be used
by the authority of some countries to limit a nation. It means that local
citizens will live under pressure of totalitarian force and will be afraid to make
certain decisions, as they could become the reason of their punishment.
Hence, people suffer from threat in their own home. For instance, the
University of Psychology in Chicago posted the results of a research that
show that people, who live in regions where death penalty is legal face
difficulties with anxiety twice often. Thus, the law regarding death row
sentences is harmful for both criminals and local society.
Even though some crimes are unbearable and put people in great
danger, I am of the opinion that some methods of punishment are
unacceptable and that everyone deserves an opportunity to live.
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Suggestion: its
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Message: Did you mean 'to its consequences'?
Suggestion: to its consequences
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14596273292 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69789328659 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6133045041 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262775152957 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824448677303 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545849349127 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596343685669 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533132932811 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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