Some people think tath there are bad circumstances in the society , such as unenjoyable jobs or pour condition among people but these situation is the best to get while other people argue that it is better to develop these situations. I consider that both opinions are true but, I agree the second one and I will explain and give reasons which is related to the these.
On the one hand, there are lots of problemsfor human to live during the life time. For example, unsatisfactory jobs are one of the most popular bad situation because employees have to work this type of jobs to earn money. Second famous situation is illiteracy that the group of people suffer from being pour in the undevelopped and developing countries. For instance, India has population that is the most in the world, however unemployment rate is higher than other countries in order to moneylessness. Despite these life chellenges, people are learning what is living in the modern world and how to solve these bad situations.
On the other hand, supporters for second forward belive that such drawback sides of the life that i mentioned above improve patiance and character of people. According to these, adults hsve more skills about life than youngsters. Moreover, I think that Jakmaʼs life way is the most relevant example for this situation which he have felt some difficulties such as his study and his job but, nowadays he is very famous person as wise over the world.
To conclude, the second view is the best choice to me to agree about improvance of human skills rather than first one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere are bad circumstances in the society , such as unenjoyable jobs or pour condit...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...jobs or pour condition among people but these situation is the best to get while other people ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...these situation is the best to get while other people argue that it is better to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reasons which is related to the these. On the one hand, there are lots of p...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...of problemsfor human to live during the life time. For example, unsatisfactory jobs are o...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this life' or 'these lives'?
Suggestion: this life; these lives
...ries in order to moneylessness. Despite these life chellenges, people are learning what is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and how to solve these bad situations. On the other hand, supporters for s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...at such drawback sides of the life that i mentioned above improve patiance and ch...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ant example for this situation which he have felt some difficulties such as his stud...
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... famous person as wise over the world. To conclude, the second view is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84074074074 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60053632501 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1503661152 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266896276517 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881932895484 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752337094033 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154326868707 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675282728099 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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