Some people are think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and worker, rather thanto benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that " the schools are very important to make the people success in there life and the people should clear there basics from the schools". For instance, the topic asserts that is that the schools help the children turn to make good citizens and worker or not? I completely agree with this statement and i shall examine the various aspects of the following paragraphs.
To begin with, firstly i define the main aim of the school to turn the children into a good citizens. Apart from that, the basic rules and respect to others learn from the school. Moving forward, the school is the first step of the children to start their life. That's why, the people take admission there children in good or reputated school because they think if the, school environment is good than the children can learn good things from school and make a good person in their life. As well as, the good person is involved the better skill, help to others, respect, and love to all. For example, the survey conducted by amarican schools and watch that 80% impact of schools on children make a good person in life.
On the other hand, in the second point is clear the main vision of school is to turn children into good worker. Education is the ability to get a job so of the children do the study than they get the good job. As well as, they start their study from schools. Moving ahead, if the schoold make the interest in study of the children so the children love to do study and make a good worker in future. Therefore, the education is very important and play vital role in the life of children. It define as, the children earn hight pay if they have skills and skills are came from the education and again the education is starting from schools. A good example here is, the report prepared by Hindustan times and result was the 90% of students who get high pay and do well reputational job who had done their study effectively.
We have seen that, there are number of answers of the question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that the schools are very important for every child and the basic future are start from the schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51804123711 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24465893387 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432989690722 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0290904546 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3888888889 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25390035811 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917917816826 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826075313526 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151195535052 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778847876875 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.