In the modern era, pollution is a monstrous problem.This is increase at alarming rate, mostly pollution is increase due to vechiles specially by cars.That is why many people believe that cars should be banned in large cities while many people argue with this statement because of some reasons.But there is some disadvantage also which I will illustrate in the following passages.
To begin with, I want to indicate that cars cause a big traffic in the big cities because nowdays, everyone have their own cars.If cars will be banned it creats so many problems.In many cities public vechiles are not in good conditions.Everyone wants to lead a superior life and without cars life is impossible now.Cars decrease the distance in a few minutes and make a ride very easily and fastly.
On the other hand, cars create a noise a lot which affect people a lot aspecially older ones in the cities.There are some solutions which decrease this plathora problem without banning.People started car polling in the cities which is not expensive also and decrease the traffic.Government will start odd and even number cars in the cities, it fastly decline the traffic.
To sum up, car banning is not a good method.In my perspective, cars are not banned, infact find some solution which are useful.For decline it, government impose a highly tax on the private cars and make sure that cars are pollution free.Goverment improve public vechiles by using this money.People use lead-free petrol for their vechiles.These steps solve this problem a lot without banning
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09411764706 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9819294281 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 10.6389614155 49.4020404114 22% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 324.75 106.682146367 304% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.75 20.7667163134 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.25 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257726709479 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158181632067 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341263939574 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158181632067 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341263939574 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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