In now days, it is general trend that people believe those students who graduate from universities they got a better job but many other argue that graduation from universities have a lot of other benefits for the individual and the society.this essay examines both side of the coin.
To begin with first of all i want to point out that those studrnts who studied from universities get a good salary job because universities give them a way or ideas.the gained qualification opened the door to get better job opportunities with high salaries.primal objective of any university is to award a sucessful candidate with a professional degree.higher qualification ensure a better pay package.some universities has a job training in their graduation which help the student to getting a better job, that student have more practical knowledge and more experienced than other somany companies offered them good job while those who have no degree will only be hired as general labour in small factories.
On the other hand, many people argue that studied from universities have wider benefits.students becoming more independent by living alone in hostels or apartmentd.they become more responsible for cleaning, cooking and paying bills.secindly, moving to other states or countries for study, they get exposed to different cultur and custom and gain knowledge about them.studying in the university also brings benefited for the community and society.
All in all, i believe although main purpose of universities is giving a paid jobs.clearky there are further other benefits.in my opinion i do agree that the aim of studying in the university should not be only for getting jobs, but also for networking and socialising as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28363636364 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21143411748 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.295999669 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 363.25 106.682146367 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330774725373 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215809530457 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683905153163 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215809530457 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683905153163 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.8 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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