Some people argue that holding events is beneficial to countries development. However, other people hold the opposite the opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
some adopt a view that being event's hosts bring a great job in boosting the country up. While the objectors argue that it could not push any growing for the country. In my opinion, I would argue that hosts cant develop their economic. Below are some discussion about both schools of thoughts.
On the one hand, it is noteworthy that sports events have a huge distribution for local tourism industry. For instance, when the national team attend to the competition, it is normally that their fans would came up with them to advocate and support the idols. Thus, the rate of accommodation, transport and catering will be increased to supply the requirements of visitors. it will be a mistake to overlook the facts that holding sport events exerts tremendous advantages in economic of the host countries.
On the other hand, the antagonist may debate that it is may be a waste of Fed budget for welfare and inside facilities. If government organize contest, they are compulsory to improve quality of stadiums, infrastructure. it is a hug investment of authorities because they have to balance between domestic facilities and sport facilities. Obviously, it is a unanswered doubt for organizers because the losses caused would be higher than the gain obtained.
To sum up, talking into consideration all of the above-mentioned facts, I believe that accepted holding the competition still exerts the many benefit. not only considering in economic side, it but also preserve and introduce the image of country into whole world. Hence, it will promote effectively the development in long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13026819923 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93546106027 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5023195937 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150491367044 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464322664341 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501375635754 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885729267839 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795550264785 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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