Some people argue that it is natural talents makes a sportsman famous. Other believe that it is hard work. Discuss both the view with your opinion.
It is argued by a number of people that some people are born with certain naturally talents, while others assume that the youth who make intensive effort get professional skills in sports. From my point of view, I believe that everyone has an innate aptitude, but you need to make a lot of struggles as well as self-improvement in order to become a successful person.
Some kids begin indicating signs of skills from a very early age. This strengthens the belief of people who accord with the view that the children are often born with skills such as singing, dancing, athletics etc. For instance, Artam is an Iranian child who reveals his football skills in the age of 12 months. His flair allows him to excel, while more hard-working people never manage to reach a comparable level at the age of one.
On the other hand, many individuals strongly recommend that expertise can be acquired by learning and that it is not limited to personal capicities. They can be developed by time devotion along with a high motivation to grow in a subject area . As an example, In those of the interviews that Ronaldo has taken part in , he has emphasized on how he could reach his goals as the best football player in the world . Due to him , whatever he has ever achieved in life is driven by countless and continuous endeavours.
To conclude ,although formless inner urges and potentials are manifested in each human being since birth , I personally assent to the perspective that there is a brilliant opportunity to become a professional in any field with the help of uninterrupted practice.
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 11
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 78
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts or ideas To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important Discuss both sides and give your opinion 61
- Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school other however say that cooepration and team working skills are more important Discuss bothe sides of this argument and then give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76642335766 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79826644348 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0563399285 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192477970077 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610254248595 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069259609403 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104091362888 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875647279343 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.