some people beleive that unpaod community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes
Social services are great ways to eatend relationship among people. It is beleived that some services which are often provided freely in any community should. compulsorily be included in one's college programs. To totally agree with this claim and will be providing strong point to Support it.
Firstly, working and being involved in on
that sort of activities will teach student.
new life experiences and skill. For
instance, one student participating on
those services, can learn things like
team work and co-operation, that can
be shared to other non-participating students.
furthermore, those earned skill can be
applied in any other field later on.
Another reason I agree with this claim is due to the reason that it helps a pupil to strength his/her socio-economic life. Take teaching sports and course related content to juniors as example which make a strong bond among other people and lead to a balanced social life. I strongly beleive beleive that bgetting into free services in community which being compulsory in high school programs support in overall development of child.
In contrary, there is an argument that including those in high school programmes will make student's routine more hectic as they are already overloaded with their own syllabus, projects and assignment.It is beleived that putting students in that activities will deterolt one's academic achievement
To conclude altough some factors may suggest that it is bad idea,i beleive that the inclusion of communial selvice on high school program will certainly help the student to learn some new skill to open the doors of new socio-life skills for the student and will help in their overall development.
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- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree Give r 89
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree Give r 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4037037037 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76894645522 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 143.95627712 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263174962771 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891956038312 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105411461818 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637056539721 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730310997583 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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