Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's developing eva, the proliferation of air travel seems to be an unstoppable trend. When it comes to this issue, some argue that affordable air transportation is detrimental. From my point of view, although it is undeniable to some extent, I believe that reasonable air commuting is more favourable by increasing accessibility to travel around the world.
On the one hand, the drawbacks of economical air travel are worth considering to some extent. The first thing to notice is this can lead to a low-quality service. Because of this kind of air commuting is really cheap, so most of them are notorious for delaying the fight. Many customers often complain that the lateness of affordable air transportation is disastrous and intrusive for clients benefits. The reasonable have bad facilities with small planes and crowded seats and traveller can not be take care carefully. As a result, this affected badly towards customer sasticfaction and damaged the quality of the airline industry.
On the other hand, while the cons are justifiable, I am convinced that money-saving air commuting brings greater merits. It is obvious that from the social perspective, the economical air transportation can broaden people's opportunities to encounter different cultures and places. This is cheap and really easy to help low-income become financially capable of paying the flight tickets. Without a doubt, the travel rates will rise and bring a chance for tourism to thrive as well as the economy. For example, Vietjet air- one of the biggest airlines with money-saving price, contribute nearly 3 billion dollars to Vietnam GDP and create 500.000 jobs opportunities. Consequently, the inexpensive air transportation is advantageous to the world economy.
In conclusion, although the low-priced air travel is concern about the service quality, I advocate that reasonable air transportation is favourable to social and economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, really, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19705952581 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5316552568 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179875853329 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602869875021 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537255746463 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120619907401 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527935051346 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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