Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals;
during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today's modern world, it has been ubiquitous for people to spend time for themselves on festivals instead of practising some traditions on these days. As a result, some contend that the meaning of the religious festivals has not been kept in mind of others anymore. From my point of view, although some people have fun on festivals, it does not mean that they have forgotten the meanings of them.
Alumitteddy, it is obvious that mest people deem festivals as celebrations and their own off-work time nowadays. In lieu of practising some religions, they are lilkely to go on a holiday trip with friends or family on certain festivals. Take Christmas as an example, it has been considered as a time for shopping, giving presents rather that a traditional day.
However, there are a myriad of reasons why I believe people have not neglected the underlying meanings of festivals. The first thing to notice is that they have been informed with fairy tales, or lessons at schools since small. Thus, the information and knowledge has ingrained in their mind even when they grow up. Another thing is that the surroundings including teachers, parents and the like will always remind people of the meaning of the festivals. For example, by celebrating Halloween, people can learn about the history of that day through stories and cosplaying the characters is a a way to turn the myth into reality. Because of that, people can be passed on the meaning of special occasions while having fun in their own way.
In unclusion, while festivals are celebrated in a quite different way and become people's own time, I am convinced that the history and meanings hidden behind them are not blurred as people have always been remindee of them from school to daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, while, another thing, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89297658863 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64190761431 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2322774974 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247461675134 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896173744552 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541029925534 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159127576297 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513088472917 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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