Some people believe that advertising brings positive effects. Others argue that this has more negative effects. What extent do you agree?
Several individuals consider that advertising renders more fruitful influences, nevertheless, others assume that it bestows more negative impacts. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain the points of view of this issue and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I do appreciate to people who believed that the existence of advertising will provide more drawbacks for all persons. However, I tend to oppose this argument and support the other perspective which argued that it is going to confer numerous useful influences to all individuals and I personally believe that it will give people multifarious information which perhaps, people need.
Regarding the assumption above, the presence of the advertisement, first and foremost, used to show the enhancement of several advanced technology which is able to assist people. Second but not less crucial, it usually published several useful announcement such as the information about scholarship and job vacancy. On the other hand, it, additionally, is able to entertain people by showing a humorous content on their advertisement, this kind of advertising typically happened in Indonesia. Nonetheless, as the existence of it is capable of rendering countless advantages, all persons still need to monitor and maintain for purchasing something from the advertisement due to the fact that advertising usually attracts people to buy every product which they released even purchasing unimportant items.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the presence of advertising is capable of providing upsides to all individuals. Nevertheless, we still have to control and make it not to influence us to buy unnecessary products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, still, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55471698113 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21213877793 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1904333479 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.2 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201706011283 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752949413702 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632732783276 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118441968631 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684473248327 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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