Some people argue that traveling by air should be limited because of air pollution and a severe depletion in natural resources. While I agree that air travel seems to have some problems, I believe that planes are still the best way to travel in the world.
There are several drawbacks of traveling by plane. Firstly, gas emissions from planes can lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. The increase in natural disasters such as earthquakes, tsunamis, and hurricanes in recent year has also been linked in part to climate change and exhaust fumes. Secondly, the cheap flights contribute greatly to severe exhaustion of fuel resources. This is because planes need a considerable energy, which helps them operate on the long journey.
However, I believe that the potential for traveling by air would be huge. Firstly, it is no doubt the best way of moving to any parts of the world. Most travelers often consider it a priority to travel because it is simply cheaper, faster, and safer than other forms of transport. Secondly, there are better measures to address environmental issues. The governments can foster the use of eco-friendly vehicles such as ships and trains that run on renewable energy from solar, wind of or water power. In this way, people are more likely to reduce emissions.
In conclusion, although some people mainly suppose that air travel has the bad effect on the environment, I believe that it still plays a central role in the future.
- Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resourches. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Nowadays most people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes What are the reasons for it Is it a positive or negative development 76
- Some people say that young people can learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Nowadays most people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes What are the reasons for it Is it a positive or negative development 65
- Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92549019608 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63917781053 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7975946757 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25319273741 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807275456333 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880734362274 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16772714866 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112294173302 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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