Whether playing games has positive or negative impacts on the young generation remains a controversial topic. While some people argue that children can gain some knowledge and useful skills by playing virtual games, I personally believe that players will lose their precious time. This writing will analyze both sides of the issue.
On the one hand, there are two considerable benefits of playing electronic games. Firstly, only by spending time on video games can the youth enhance their problem- solving ability. Due to the fact that some educational games involve certain rules which requires players to think carefully before making any decisions. Secondly, many computer games, especially educational games provide great opportunities to strengthen their coordination as well as concentration .For instance, in the games, players often have to move the character around to avoid enemies and obstacles.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks of playing games are even more significant. First of all, various games are designed in an extremely attractive way which makes players much easier to addicted to them. In addition, the adolescents will neglect studying at school which eventually leads to disappointing exam outcomes. On top of that, there are direct connections between addicted game and declining health. For example, in a recent study, the Vietnamese government found that 70% of many diseases such as obesity and cancer arise from an excess of playing games.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against playing video games, but it seems to me that parents should spend more time with their children to guide them outdoor activities instead of computer games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40671641791 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70601120813 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64552238806 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3650606505 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5384615385 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283280322861 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863468496513 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674684213669 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164141598156 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668340400736 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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