It is true that university education provides many benefits for students. While I accept that people from all walks of life should be approached with tertiary education, I do not agree that all tuition fees should be provided by the authorities, regardless of stufent's backgrounds.
On the one hand, if everyone has chances to study at universities or colleges, they will make contributions to social progress. Firstly, the university environment provides for students theoretical knowledge and practical skills which allow them to find well-paid jobs. As a result, they can easily earn more money and bring up their family. Secondly, only when students enroll in higher education can it promote students’ physical, intellectual and emotional development. For instance, my friend who is studying at Harvard University, which not only provides major knowledge, but also engages in outdoor activities such as yoga and dancing.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why governments should not try to pay tuition fees for all learners. First of all, the excess of money invested in tertiary education eventually leads to budget distribution of other fields. This means that infrastructures and health services will suffer from a lack of money in the future. On top of that, free higher education can have direct impacts in motivation of students. This is because whether they have good or bad results will be considerably not a matter for them. Furtheograms will be lost its value in no time when free costs are implemented without rewards for outstanding performances.
In conclusion, it is clear that attending in universities is a basic human right and it provides for learners various advantages, but it seems to me that those undergraduates are more likely to be beneficial in their careers if governments do not pay tuition payments for all pupils.
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- Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resourches. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people say that young people can learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27739726027 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05584438928 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.343625126 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234246031153 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717842229401 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417547735258 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135125762192 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309965443994 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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