Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some experts claim that, permitting children to make their own choice on their favorite stuff like eating, clothing and entertainment are the sign of thinking only of ownselves rather than society, while others argue that it is necessary to teach about talking own decision by themselves to make them independent. I partially agree on this statement and the essay will examine the arguments on both favour and against on the topic.
To begin with, letting authority to the children can be advantage to them to develop decision making power in them. It can seem tiny thing, giving permission to children to make own choice on food menu, clothes and their color, their playing stuff, but in adulthood they can realize, that small decision are the key of being good decision maker in their personal and professional life. For instance, in western country, parents permit freedom to their children from small age, which helps to develop decision maker personality and independent in them in adulthood. Moreover, this help children to develop outgoing personality in them and they will not hesitate to talk with people and come forward in any place and speak and fight for themselves. Furthermore, this can also be very advantageous to make them more responsible for their choice , confident and independent in their life, however they can move ahead without other support and can enjoy freedom.
On the other hand, some parents think that, by choosing for their children they are protecting and avoiding the mistake of them. Also, they think they are making more responsible to their child towards society and family by teaching cooperative nature. As an example, in restaurant if children are allowed to make decision on food menu then they order everything as per their preferences only by ignoring family members. So, some family feel necessary to protect them by not giving decision making authority in small age.
To conclude, allowing decision to children is the controversial topic of today’s society, however, I believe that letting them to make own decision helps to make forward step if life, while parents also teach them about family responsibility and cooperative nature and social norms and culture in same time as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 842, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e them more responsible for their choice , confident and independent in their life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1388101983 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63094308833 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507082152975 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6429737291 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.166666667 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295148950121 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116008114877 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854633851844 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198143587869 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524916499609 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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