Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that children should be free to select their priorities on routine issues like hobbies and clothes which may lead to arrogant individuals; whereas others believe that their rights must be limited just to the subjects which can be effective on them. This essay discusses both sides of this debate and then I will give my own perspective.
There are pores and cones of giving authority to youngsters for choosing their daily issues. On the one hand, if children have the right to choose every subject, it will lead to a sense of fulfillment and it can help to grow their self-confidence. As well as this, they have a chance to evaluate the consequences of a variety of choices that will be essential to make eminent decisions. On the other hand,, it may have serious repercussions if children feel that only their priorities are important and their ideas always should be defined by the route.
However, there are also some advantages and disadvantages of being free for adolescents only in subjects that affect them. The main merit of being limited to making a decision in routine tasks is to prevent waste of money and time because of wrong options. One good illustration of this is choosing clothes children just pay attention to cosmetic aspects and neglect other important features like the material and quality of them. Turning to disadvantages, control of children may lead to them rebelling and will not have to accept any offer as a consultation in the future.
In conclusion, I believe both sides have their merits and drawbacks. On balance, however, I feel that children should be free to make decisions entirely. This is because growing up in this way and being able to make crucial decisions is more important than the short-term benefits of a controlled manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, well, whereas, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90460526316 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75356849495 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3083523297 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218589729666 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755483084586 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533045908584 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138016397793 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392080862341 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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