Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that children should be free to select their priorities on routines issues like hobbies and clothes which may lead to arrogant individuals; whereas other believe that their right must be limited just for the subjects which can be effective on them. This essay discusses both sides of this debate an then I will give my own perspective.
There are pores and cones of giving authority to youngsters completely for choosing their daily issues. On the one hand, if children have the right to choose in every subjects, it will lead to the sense of fulfillment and it can help to grow their self-confident. As well as this, they have a chance to evaluate the consequence of a variety of choices that will be essential to make eminent decisions. On the other hand, although, it may have serious repercussion if children feel that just their priorities are important and their idea always should be defined the route.
However, there are also some advantages and disadvantages of being free for adolescents only in subjects that affect them. The main merit of being limited to make a decision in routine tasks is to prevent waste of money and time because of wrong options. One good illustration of this is choosing the clothes by children just be attention to cosmetic aspects and neglecting other important features like the material and quality of them. Turning to disadvantages, control of children may lead to make them rebel that will not have accept any offer as a consultation in the future.
In conclusion, I believe both sides have their merits and drawbacks. On balance, however, I feel that children should be free to make decisions entirely. This is because growing up them in this way and being able to make crucial decisions is more important than short term benefits of controlled manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, well, whereas, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9025974026 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71108367643 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5914671034 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210055823377 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744542591906 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048364131755 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135124023125 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358257961411 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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