some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Oppspring topic is always a heated issue. Parents must strick the answer for this question: “Is it flawless that allowing our kids to make own choice on dayly subjects?”. Some hands claim that it is crucial for children to have decisions about affective matter in their life but I absolutely agree the former saying that kids will survive in which civilians only think about egoistic benefits. Let me show what are the advantages and disadvantages of this perental guidance.
Firstly, some individuals believe that it is crucial for allowing kids to make own decisions. One argument in support is confidence of kids is able to be built by starting with dictanging own choices. Kids given have to allow them to learn and grow while having outcomes parents. For instance, between self-reliant kid who are not allowed to make their own resolution and self autonomy child who have political opinion, self autonomy kid are able to trouble-tackle in their life. They confront with all matters with self-asurance as well as a insight will be shaped.
On the other hand, they claim that this lead to potential downside. It will take form a sociey of citizen who idolize individualism than others around. As an ullustration, they are big on singing and disturb people in general library. They normalize their pattern and believe that is proper. This parental guidance shaped kids to be self-asserted and then the world is under influence of individuals who only think their choices are rational. For more example, in a teamwork and they will not absorb others’s opinion and do which are meticulous with them. Thus, allowing kids to make their decisions on day-to-day matters when they were a kid or teenagers will create some negavtive behaviours for society and themself.
In conclusion, it is obvious that some reason to support the idea that it is important for allowing children to make own decisions but I still definitely argee the former and believe that it will bring individuals to pitpall at the end of the day.
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- some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes other people believe that it is important for 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l matters with self-asurance as well as a insight will be shaped. On the othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00591715976 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73026754032 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544378698225 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9087099245 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329527945617 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994240904072 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787544775559 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205554286751 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274528323767 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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