Decision making is one of the the key points in our society, that could start in younger ages. Although some may argue that children can make their own decisions and build a strong personality, others underline that parents also have an important role in this matter. In my opinion, children should be guided by older people to prevent building up a selfish adult personality and to learn to respect others, as well as themselves.
On one hand, freedom of choice is important to stimulate creativity and social development. While promoting self-growth by the means of giving the initiative as early as possible in life, can stimulate some attributes reflected later, as a creative personality and successful businessman or artist. Moreover, when kids choose their own ways, they usually become more social and stimulate more their human interaction, between their family and peers. But not all are advantages and some matters can lead to dramatic consequences in the future, if some poorly choices are made in this crucial development period.
Therefore, on the other hand, the importance of guidance and tutoring can be lifesaving or simply as an orientation for the right path in life, with the help of more experienced people, learning to respect the world that surround them. Given the fact that children are still learning, they lack important basic knowledge, as the right choices of healthy food or protective clothing take can lead to future illnesses or have impact on their physical or psychological well-being. Furthermore, the share and discussed opinions can be beneficial, to build up a balanced character and to better adapt a child to the challenges of society.
To sum up, learning is a process that walk with us all our lives but should start in younger ages with appropriate support from more knowledgeable people. Nevertheless, I would also recommend that children should be listen to, so it can be explained the difference between right and wrong and each action have its own consequences.
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- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 11
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
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...he key points in our society, that could start in younger ages. Although some may...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83961842545 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5838910098 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164581163859 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592076436751 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532047852108 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999703165875 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519006254754 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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