Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Art these days and across the time was considered an integral part of the different societies. the art works has been started from a long time ago in the era of ignorance and it continued during the next centuries. It was taking a various types like poems and singing. In the past and these types was developed whether the shape of the art itself or by the appearance of new art shapes. But the question repeated permanently is the art considered a work should has meaning, goals and Message to the recipient or it is just a work for fun and joyful? And for finding a typical answer let us take a look on art in general and the art works.
By looking in the past, singing and poetry were the most common art works between the tribes. The poets were telling the poems for motivation to start an invasion or defending their nation. So, these works were having the importance among people in that time as it were influencing and motivating them for a certain direction. On the hand, these works could be as a kind of boasting between the people inside the same community or for sarcasm, these ways were for the intention for fun only.
In addition to singing and poems, the arts have taken a various kind in the last few decades and the most common were filming, theater, TV series. At the end of the sixties of the twentieth century, particularly in 1967 after the hard defeat of the Egyptian army, this embarrassing part of time in Egypt, the art was having the main role to show the hardness of the defeat and emerges the expression of the need of starting the war to get back the occupied territory. Thus, Egypt has a great victory in 1973, because of charging the society by art works, then recording this historic victory to the coming generations. Moreover, there were some works appeared to show the expression of the opponent to the peace agreement between the Egyptian President Sadat and Israel in Oslo.
Unlike what mentioned previously, with then entry of money in the art works and the unprovoked raise of the artists’ salaries, the aims of the producers who own these money were to gain profits only, so they are doing this works for distraction without looking if it has message or not?
Finally, the art is the most important work which can easily influence the society because it can reach people speedily and form their emotions and believes. Furthermore, getting people out of depression and life stress is some thing very important for the mental and psychological health. So that, I believe that we should balance between the main role of an art has a message and the role of being looking for entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 468.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62820512821 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50947870699 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8686924599 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121290386757 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041844022777 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248495407847 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721725604098 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254486503093 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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