Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose ohers believe that it is merely distraction from real life.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
There are.a plenty of people believe and think that Art gives us meaning in our life and it's important for them because art gives them motivation and oher can see that Art ist essential and it's just a photos.This essay will discuss both.
The most significant feature thing for people who see that Art makes them happy because these people characterized by a quite personalty however; they are active they like to concentrate in a clear place and Also; clear mind on the other hand; they are sensitive anything impact and influence them and they are love involving people to express their emotional with other so ;Art is important thing in them life .Atr makes us draw and imagine those people have creative abilities and skiiils to imagine even they can imagine people to copy them details in their drawing these shown that drawing needs patient people moreover; Youth people should gain theses skills in young age painting is important for them Rather than being on the globalization.Arts benefits their mind and skills and makes them understand the difference culture of any county by drawing to obtain a new ideas and experience.on the hand; for instance: Fashion designers; clothing and accessories; films and video editors those people who imagine the movie and graphic they are the wittyier one
In stark constrast; other thinks that art is merely a distraction and boring that think art is dosy however; Art has been lacking for years bo body in this technology stage like to use and are one of the most hoppies needs concentration and this hardest thing to appreciate because not many students and people may be they used to use E learning languages or work these things are important more than to draw .In out dated in the simplesty.on the flip sides; in many parts of these hoppy not many people allow to draw in a clear and quiet place the culture has changed.Nowadays; people used programs in a Mobil phone to draw that's normally powerful more than drawing and painting.
To sum up ; puplic are different in mind; culture and traditional.so ; art is powerful makes everyone set his mind clearly in a simple mind and some music behind in out moded.Ohers ; love working thay are implusive thay don't love to concentrate they prefer watching; Trying a new things because they saw art not pivotal specially in this technology world. I'm my point of view; Definitely Art is very vital thing and everyone needs relaxing because being artist not easy needs to be a confidence people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a photo' or simply 'photos'?
Suggestion: a photo; photos
...see that Art ist essential and its just a photos.This essay will discuss both. Th...
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Line 6, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...Art ist essential and its just a photos.This essay will discuss both. The mos...
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Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('personalty') instead of another adjective.
...y because these people characterized by a quite personalty however; they are active they like to c...
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Line 10, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... so ;Art is important thing in them life .Atr makes us draw and imagine those peop...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Atr
...o ;Art is important thing in them life .Atr makes us draw and imagine those people ...
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Line 10, column 748, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arts
... Rather than being on the globalization.Arts benefits their mind and skills and make...
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Line 10, column 1063, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ie and graphic they are the wittyier one In stark constrast; other thinks that ar...
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Line 14, column 312, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...te because not many students and people may be they used to use E learning languages o...
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Line 14, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e things are important more than to draw .In out dated in the simplesty.on the fli...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...things are important more than to draw .In out dated in the simplesty.on the flip ...
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Line 14, column 511, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drawing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: drawing
...ts of these hoppy not many people allow to draw in a clear and quiet place the culture ...
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Line 14, column 570, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nowadays
...and quiet place the culture has changed.Nowadays; people used programs in a Mobil phone ...
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Line 14, column 626, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... used programs in a Mobil phone to draw thats normally powerful more than drawing and...
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Line 17, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ohers
...mind and some music behind in out moded.Ohers ; love working thay are implusive thay ...
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Line 17, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... ; love working thay are implusive thay dont love to concentrate they prefer watchin...
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Line 17, column 281, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...rate they prefer watching; Trying a new things because they saw art not pivotal specia...
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Line 17, column 357, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tal specially in this technology world. Im my point of view; Definitely Art is ver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91529411765 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60969803711 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 106.0 20.2975951904 522% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 655.883135551 49.4020404114 1328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 522.25 106.682146367 490% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 106.25 20.7667163134 512% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184194987943 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122438160739 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107792112718 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132890524377 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991506447749 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.9 13.0946893788 419% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.65 50.2224549098 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.5 11.3001002004 385% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.01 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.4 10.1190380762 439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a photo' or simply 'photos'?
Suggestion: a photo; photos
...see that Art ist essential and its just a photos.This essay will discuss both. Th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...Art ist essential and its just a photos.This essay will discuss both. The mos...
^^^^
Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('personalty') instead of another adjective.
...y because these people characterized by a quite personalty however; they are active they like to c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... so ;Art is important thing in them life .Atr makes us draw and imagine those peop...
^^
Line 10, column 413, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Atr
...o ;Art is important thing in them life .Atr makes us draw and imagine those people ...
^^^
Line 10, column 748, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arts
... Rather than being on the globalization.Arts benefits their mind and skills and make...
^^^^
Line 10, column 1063, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ie and graphic they are the wittyier one In stark constrast; other thinks that ar...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 312, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...te because not many students and people may be they used to use E learning languages o...
^^^^^^
Line 14, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e things are important more than to draw .In out dated in the simplesty.on the fli...
^^
Line 14, column 411, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...things are important more than to draw .In out dated in the simplesty.on the flip ...
^^
Line 14, column 511, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drawing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: drawing
...ts of these hoppy not many people allow to draw in a clear and quiet place the culture ...
^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 570, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nowadays
...and quiet place the culture has changed.Nowadays; people used programs in a Mobil phone ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 626, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... used programs in a Mobil phone to draw thats normally powerful more than drawing and...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ohers
...mind and some music behind in out moded.Ohers ; love working thay are implusive thay ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... ; love working thay are implusive thay dont love to concentrate they prefer watchin...
^^^^
Line 17, column 281, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...rate they prefer watching; Trying a new things because they saw art not pivotal specia...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 357, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tal specially in this technology world. Im my point of view; Definitely Art is ver...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91529411765 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60969803711 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 106.0 20.2975951904 522% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 655.883135551 49.4020404114 1328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 522.25 106.682146367 490% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 106.25 20.7667163134 512% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184194987943 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122438160739 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107792112718 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132890524377 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991506447749 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.9 13.0946893788 419% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.65 50.2224549098 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.5 11.3001002004 385% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.01 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.4 10.1190380762 439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.