Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people are demanding large companies and industries to move far away to regional areas, and do not let them work in urban centres. They rather this idea for many reasons. Advantages of moving industries always out weight disadvantages, but moving the large companies, disadvantages will out weight the advantages. this essay will discuss firstly, the advantages of moving factories far from urban centres, secondly, discuss the disadvantages of sending large companies with industries.
Sending factories to regional areas is a good idea, has to be applied, even it will take much time. By looking at factories exhaust, and how much damage it causes, you will understand, why it has to be applied. Research said thousands of people have been killed because of air pollution a year, and a lot of children grow up with lung diseases, because of this dust. moving industries is an important case, we have to care about it, for our future, for our children and our environment.
Secondly, sending large companies far from urban centres is a bad idea, its disadvantages out weight its advantages, despite, i can not find and advantages. No one can find an advantage in moving your country's centres far away to regional areas. large companies are the main part of investments that serve your country and support your economy. Moving these backups to regional areas will undermine this importance, which causes loss much money, and these companies do not cause air pollution.
finally, we have to do what serves our people, our country and our environment, despite what it cost. Sending industries will save thousands of lives and grant our children healthy growth. doing the same thing with large companies will hardly hurt the investments and destroy the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13494809689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74301724904 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6547173514 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296234831692 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10136859391 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733850338567 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179312873928 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930904529201 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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