Some people believe that the care of elderly people should be a priority of government spending. Others believe that government spending should focus more on young people, especially on their education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought that the care of elderly individuals should be a priority of government spending, other people advice that government spending should pay attention more on the young generation, especially on their education. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with the second notion because of its benefits and pratical for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that numerous people have replaced by new innovation such as automatic robots, so professional course for teenagers is greatly significant for the society. Not only does this phenomenon provide the deversity sourse of employees which improve the productivity and economic background of their country, but also the propotion of unemployments and homeless people will be reduced gradually by the affection of this trends, advanced the country's improvement. Furthermore, the creative and imagination abilities of adolescense can be increased dramatically which develop their mentality life and cognitive systerm. To illustrate, there was a survey by Bobby Timer, the famous interviewer and professor, who is expert about the success of european country where their government are concentrate on the teenagers's education. The statistic demonstrated that nearly every countries has got plenty achievement.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem when compare with the first notion. the older generation should be supported by the government for their contribution during the young period and also the socioeconomic trouble will be widened where just wealthy and talent student can have enough conditon to achieve in quality universities. Moreover, many government take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, various harmful influence will be led by this action to the postgraduates.
Tto conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with the second statement, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52870090634 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98369840399 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0738444462 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.769230769 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237658163799 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761391881768 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126929934584 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151485678923 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125558764557 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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