Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that in spite of having a various of translation software available, learning a other language could be benefits in the modern era. From my point of view, that i mostly agree with this notion because of its practical in the social. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First off all, in the international world and with the appearence of new innovation that individuals have been interacted with foreign speaker more frequenly in their occupation, so language is hugely significant for the nation development. Not only will citizens have more opportunity to achive in great companies or international business with appopriate salary, but also numerous academic knowledge and valuable information can be provided for the postgraduate, improving graduately their potential life. Furthermore, many new occupation will be created for the people such as translater, international interviewer and tourioum guilder which reduce the percentage of unemployment in their country. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Alison Becker, the famous scientist and professor which was abot the sucess of adolesence in London who know more than one language. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has got a plenty of achevement in their career.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this phenomenon for the population. Nowadays, some teenagers are just concentrate for training their language abilities and forgot the other subject and also at some sitiation that the creation and imagination of the young generation can be decreased. Moreover, many government take advantage from this investment for their own revenus, harmful influence will be led by this action.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some nagative aspect for the social. The state need to have clear plans to advance their children for the nation development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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...will analyse this statement in detail. First off all, in the international worl...
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...plenty of achevement in their career. However, we can not negate the drawback ...
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... influence will be led by this action. To conclude, by my agrument from the ess...
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...agree with this statement, but it still have some nagative aspect for the social. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35643564356 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94933195229 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3274574249 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106316514079 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394676846798 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602411611885 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760724672687 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532209000944 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.