Task 2: In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?
Some people believe that in many nations, it is illegal for business to reject job applicants for their age. From my point of view, this notion have both benefits and drawbacks with each occupation and each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, required age is hugely significant for the development of the great companies and individuals life. Not only do the citizens have enough confident, academic knowledge and work experience to solve the difficul problem, but also adolesence will have more time for improving themselves to appropriate with the business. Furthermore, some teenagers do not have enough ability to cope with difficul challenge in their career. The individuals will be pressed by the invisible pressure from the sucessfull and achivement, becoming stress and deppression. To illustrate, there was a statistic by professional Timparker that the most production of many large campanies in England have come from the older generation.
However, we can not negate the important function of talent youngs generation for the development of their country. The youngs will have new idea and creative innovation, and also the growth of great companies will be contributed by teenagers ability. Moreover, the advantage exerience can be approacher and transmited by the older to teenager who is the future of their nation and business.
Tto conclude, by my agrument from these essay that the statement have its own helpful and hamful for the individuals, so the managers need to have bright plan to improve the genius youngs generation and their companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people believe that in many nations...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. At first, required age is hugely signifi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d have come from the older generation. However, we can not negate the important...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
... great companies will be contributed by teenagers ability. Moreover, the advantage exerie...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... future of their nation and business. Tto conclude, by my agrument from these ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32549019608 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.883182487 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4643271499 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267756219933 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102042657955 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132346980638 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162482760327 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948330008237 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.