Some people believe that charity organizations should give the aid to those who are in great needs, while others think that charity organizations should concentrate on helping people who live in their own country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Many people these days harbor a concern that social foundation must to be given their budget for people which residing in their country only. As an opposed, many people maintain an opinion that humanitarian organizations should give aids to great needed people. Both given justifications will be discussed by this essay in depth.
On one hand, charity organizations should contribute all budget to help the residents in their country, there is no denying that. After all, the financial resources and aids come from local benefactors, hence, most of them want to provide help for people who live in their country. In addition, focusing all the national resources on solving the present domestic issues is one of the top priorities of every nations. For instance, many underdevelopment countries such as Vietnam which is well-known to be suffered from natural disasters, therefore, these countries does not have enough sources to donate for other the international community.sensus that social foundation should distribute supplies reasonably to help the persons who really need it. Firstly, there are a paramount of underdevelopment countries had been affected by many international factors, as a result, the developing path of these nations will be slowed down.
On the other hand, there is a widespread consensus that social foundation should distribute supplies reasonably to help the persons who really need it. Firstly, there are a paramount of underdeveloped countries had been affected by many international factors, as a result, the evolutional path of these nations will be slowed down. To illustrate, Africa had been undered the regime of greater nations, consequently, the economy industry of Africa have affected by many negative influences such as civil wars and unemployment which are the precursors of the lack in solving problems abilities. Therefore, the support of international humanitarian foundations play a pivotal role in the recovery of the underdeveloped countries. Moreover, many volunteer foundations have been created by the donation of developed countries which is use for helping who are greatly needed. For example, UNICEF is a global foundation which had been founded to fight for the right of the worldwide children, and the resources of those organizations are almost come from international corporation of government of many countries where it will be a mayor abundance if just spending the whole aids and financial resources to their own residents.
In conclusion, while many people believe that charity organization should give the support to people in their country, I maintain an opposed ideas that more global organizations should be built to use the international resources for helping more people who are really need it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...harbor a concern that social foundation must to be given their budget for people which ...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nces such as civil wars and unemployment which are the precursors of the lack in ...
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Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'idea'?
Suggestion: idea
...in their country, I maintain an opposed ideas that more global organizations should b...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
... for helping more people who are really need it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, after all, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43023255814 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13141844912 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453488372093 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8790752742 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4666666667 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305987485252 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108472223111 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102506701552 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235375568927 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937795429502 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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