Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In modern days, phones has became part of our life and students nowadays are pretty much relied on them for both educational and formal purpose. That is why there has been debate about banning or allowing phones while children are attending school and in this case, I have my support on the side where children should be authorized to use their phones.
Phone banning has been the center of many discussions in recently years. Since phones have some huge effects on educational process of children, especially some negative effects such as: children usually play phones during studying time and don't concentrate on instructor's words, or children eventually turn on their phone's sound effect which cause some disturbance to the other students,... ; many teachers and parents have demanded some rules which restrict or forbid phones. It is also noticeable that in some cases, phones have became a major problem to some noble students since they harmed and make students' line went lower and lower.
On the other hand, when we looking into the bright side of phones using, we can probably see that the advantages are much larger than the disadvantages. In educational purpose, phones are proper tools for students to look up information and knowledge without spending much time and working. Instead of going to the library and trying to spend hours finding things in books, phones with Internet provides student with wide range of information and utilities to receive data in a very efficient way. For example, students are given tasks which tell them to find out about population of a countries, make statistic about the data and visually show them to the class, in this case, a phone can fulfill all of those tasks without drawbacks. As we can see, phones also can be used for teaching with visual and sound effects using Powerpoint or some based programs and this has been a trend in many years. And that's why I am totally agree with allowing phones in school day due to their huge advantages in educational purpose.
Although discussions to decide a ban of phones will be conducted or using phones will be allowed are still on progress, I am gonna have my opinion permitting phones using in class due to their huge benefits in education.
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- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: become
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Suggestion: don't
...ly play phones during studying time and dont concentrate on instructors words, or ch...
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...e some disturbance to the other students,... ; many teachers and parents have dema...
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...nts to look up information and knowledge without spending much time and working. ...
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...ime and working. Instead of going to the library and trying to spend hours findin...
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...ue to their huge benefits in education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, while, for example, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91556728232 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50561004896 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530343007916 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8060114769 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.307692308 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312957787951 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113189614207 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885679063949 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220049049342 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534837037959 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.