In some countries the number of people using bicycle as main transport mode is decreasing, even though it is so beneficial. Why is this so? How can people be encouraged to use more bicycles?
In few nations the ratio of bicycles are declining day by day because of public transport as well as other private transport. But bicycle is so fruitful and administration have to impose high tax on other transportation and aware individuals to give more preference to bicycle instead of other means of transportation.
To begin with, in this modern era technology spread its roots all over the world. For instance, companies launching new mode of transportation which is not only convenient but also become a source of amusement which allure people to buy them that is why bicycle is on the back seat. Moreover, cars and public transport is very lucrative as compare to bicycle because it save our precious time while traveling. For example, it makes so easier to travel one place to another place because people can songs and watch videos while traveling and and cars consume less time as compare to bicycle. As a result, it is beneficial for every age group people to give more preference to cars or public transport.
On the other hand, government have to impose high tax on these types of vehicles. Like, cars, buses and so on. So that, people can give preference to bicycle which not only make people fit as fiddle but also stay away from diseases. Last but not the least, administration have to motivat new generation by organising camps in schools or college and tell them the advantages of bicycle by which they donot spend hefty sum of money on buying luxury cars and make their first choice to buy a bicycle which is worthwhile for them.
To conclude, every thing have his own importance in these world and bicycle is one of them. But people have to use other transportation to some extent like for some emergencies and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76567656766 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68983174318 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7789016731 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294335097267 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106607814774 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726431938706 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188793928495 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255851401473 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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