Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
In what ways are computers a hindrance?
What is your opinion?
Some societies, these days, think that one of the electronic tools which are computer gives them more drawbacks than benefits. Others, nevertheless, believe that it is such vitally important tools to assist them completing their various routines. This essay will explain both points of view and I will present my perspectives in the following paragraphs.
There are three reasons of why people believe that computer gives more downsides rather than upsides. It, first and foremost, is able to give them negative influences when they used it for accessing some bad things. Second but not less crucial, this tool, moreover, is capable of making people addicted which is, in the end, able to create another awful thing for them. Last but not least, it is unable to give them the things which they need in their life.
Besides those arguments, other people still believe that this device is capable of rendering countless advantages instead of bestowing disadvantages. It, firstly, is able to help people being connected to other people. Secondly, all people are capable of obtaining several information by using computer. This modern technology, thirdly, can aid all people to finish their variety of works.
By way of conclusion, I do appreciate the opposing view which believed that having computer will confer them some weaknesses rather than its strengths. Nonetheless, in my perspectives, I personally agree to people who think that this temporary technology is extremely essential and will provide more benefits instead of its drawbacks because This tool, furthermore, is capable of doing countless things which is able to assist people in all aspects that they need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
...ly, all people are capable of obtaining several information by using computer. This modern technolo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29213483146 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68836123262 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4790003219 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243384572286 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092505690129 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528662000292 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151773218405 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281425111111 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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