Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a stereotype regarding brain drain when a huge number of students are inclined to pursue their education path in other countries. Although it is no denial that this trend still eventuates, I, as an advocate, believe strongly that everything is changing now since some apparent advantages to the country are conspicuous.
First, a source of high-skilled and well-educated labourers is the fruitful achievement that a nation deserves to get thanks to the students learning overseas. This is because with the advanced education system, several developed countries are becoming the greatest destinations of learners who wish to expand their knowledge and adopt new thoughts, which can help to mould a better worker for the work labour. Furthermore, overseas students deem to bring the modernization and the advance in technology back to their home country with a strong desire to adjust and boost the economy. The growing number of young teachers following their further education in foreign countries is a rational example to prove the correctness of this trend. With new teaching methods aiming to develop learners’ critical and logical thinking as well as the application of technology, their lessons turn to attract students’ attention more than old passive teaching methods of their seniors in the education sector. I remember vividly my university teacher’s claim that don’t teach the old dogs new lessons.
Second, the fear of brain drain has created a hesitation when letting would-be main labourers study abroad. It is a wide belief that those people seem to be lured by the greater welfare and handsome salary offered to settle down in foreign countries rather than be back home and devote themselves to the growth of their nations. However, this is absolutely a misleading understanding. The fact must be mentioned that the government does recognize the issue and makes endeavors to encourage students studying abroad to serve their home countries. Moreover, the young now themselves are cognizant of the importance in boosting their home’s economy; therefore, it is inaccurate to evaluate that the trend of overseas learning does more harm than good to their homeland.
In conclusion, with a well-trained workforce, the economy is likely to receive numerous benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38227146814 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90573135084 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590027700831 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1685589426 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.785714286 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10397187201 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360548254327 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315396805353 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575832879701 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359424423185 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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