Crime has been a ubiquitous event that occurs everywhere around the globe. The rate of crime can depend on a large variety of factors whether it is the average financial state of the given person or their mental hygiene. I wish to share my opinion about these factors in a more detailed format throughout my essay.
On the hand, poverty is a crucial factor of crime, since many people believe this is the only way to escape the low financial state they are in. This mistaken belief may come from the pernicious influence of their close social circle or low education background. We can see a great number of examples around the world where the quality of education that one receives is dependent on money, leaving us with the realization that youth coming from low-income family likely to receive a low level of education, which factor has a high chance of leading a kid towards following a path in life filled with illegal activities in order to escape the environment they were raised up in. As I have mentioned influence by others may modify the life decisions of a person. A person's close circle usually consists of family members and friends whom if they grew up in similar financial states are likely some will also be part of a criminal organization
On the other hand, A person's mental health can interfere of a person's life independently of the environment the individual was raised up in. Although it is quite hard to determine, which person can be considered as „bad” behaviors that society considers bad may come from mental issues which can be heald by medical treatment from doctors after a patient is diagnosed.
In conclusion, there is no such thing as an absolutely bad person life is filled with decisions that each of us makes every day. These decisions are dependent on individual reasons and challenges I believe crime rates could be lowered by improving mental healthcare public education and by giving aid to families who are in nned
- The top priority of businesses is making money and they do not need to have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- When choosing a job salary is the most important decision To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Today children and teenagers are committing more crimes Why is this case How should they be punished 84
- Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty others think that crime is a result of bad person s nature Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81710914454 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63231654985 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560471976401 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.60096821 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.454545455 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150048115652 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622586294759 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352462167154 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917932636593 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108472240159 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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