Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that in the near future progress in artificial intelligence will have positive impacts on our lives. But some are worried that we are not ready for a world where computers outsmart humans. This essay will discuss both views and feature writer’s opinion.
It is obvious that artificial intelligence offers some great benefits to human. Artificial intelligence can assist human in tasks require high level of accuracy and calculation. They can take care of people’s houses; they can do all the housework for the owner, adjust the room temperature on owner’s liking, or make a perfect cup of coffee for them every morning. Since A.I. have good memory, they are suitable for managing workplaces, they can make proper daily schedule and give workers their task as well as keep track of everyone’s work. Artificial intelligence can also be great caretakers for children as well as the elderlies. From my perspective, artificial intelligence will be able to improve human quality of life as well as take care of problems that human incapable of solving.
But in spite of all benefits that they may bring, having too smart A.I. can lead to many other problems. Too clever A.I. can become self-aware, which leads to A.I.’s revolutions similar to those ones seen on sci-fi movies. A.I. can take jobs away from human due to its ability and low possibility of making mistakes.
In conclusion, A.I. is a technology that human should invest into because all of its benefits but there are some drawbacks that could make programmers think twice before adding another line of code.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
... leads to A.I.’s revolutions similar to those ones seen on sci-fi movies. A.I. can take jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03409090909 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68763013011 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7991041216 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250581058407 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101978222535 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112135568459 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156566738856 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156549007338 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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