Some people believe that education and healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the government. Others think that it should be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Regarding the controversies about whether education and healthcare services should be fully funded by the government or paid completely by each individual themselves, I both agree and disagree for the following reasons.
I believe it is only natural for the government of a nation to attend to their people's health, well-being, and development, for it is not only their resposibility as leaders but also a promising investment with a positive vision of a healthy and intelligent population along with other beneficial results in the long run.
With that said, I also partly agree with the opposite idea that each citizen should be obliged to pay for the services they use. It is totally reasonable, except that I, at the same time, think it would be a great help if the authorities could somehow support a certain portion of such fees, especially for people with special needs like the homeless, the disabled, veterans, etc. In terms of education specifically, while students loans can somewhat be considered a kind of motivation for learners to perform well in their study, overwhelming figures of tuition fees may backfire and turn out to put a lot of pressure and burden on them, eventually distracting them from school-work or even affecting their health, mentality, etc.
Overall, I reckon that both views have their own points and should be perceived as two sides of a coin. What's important is that there should be a way to make their co-existence balanced and effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, i reckon, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0693877551 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93111245802 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640816326531 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2522196935 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.428571429 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304745590382 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138638672124 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588750879314 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180034109982 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529858804452 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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